Adamki11s's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Death Maze]

A nice effort but...

The maze game is a very common concept for a game idea. I myself have used it for many other submissions.
However since it's used so commonly you need to spice it up a bit. Maybe have some different features instead of just getting to the end of the maze.

Maybe add in some rotating windmills or moving objects that need to be avoided.

Also please never use the flash built in preset gradient colours such as the red and black circular gradiant, it makes your graphics look tacky.

Another way you could build on the game is to have a mute button or more music as the loud blaring music can get very annoying.

And last but not least when you submit a game try to give it some sort of replay value, your game kept me occupied for about 1 minute because it was very short with only 3 levels and sadly not very challenging.

Add in some more levels and objects and some different music and you have an enjoyable game.

i know i'm sounding very harsh but im only trying to point out the facts as i was making these types of games a couple of months ago and now i've improved a lot.

Don't get disheartned by this review though; keep working and persevere and you will improve.

Check out my Mouse avoider game if you want. It's called adventurea

Good luck with your future submissions.

1234ummm6 responds:

Thanks I will take your ideas under consideration but since this was my first game it was just a test to see if I could do it. I didn't expect many people to play it.

[Paper Plane Blow]

Nice graphics but....

This concept has been done lots of times before, i also found that it was extremly hard to control the plane no matter what setting i chhanged my mic to.
But i must say your artwork was very nice, good choice of music too. So overall a good game but the controls were a little too touch for me.

FlashJockey responds:

It was done lots of times but not in a flash game
thanks for the review

[Stick Tale]

Bad

The graphics were poor.
Very unclear, hardly any choice of option and i saw no way to win the game.
What was the point??
I'd give it 1/10 because i liked the music at the start. :)

zachtejeda2 responds:

its suppose to be a stick game....sick graphics cant be much better.

[Clear Vision II]

Wicked

The graphics for a flash game were awesome!
You've got a real tallent for annimating Daani!
Plz make a 3rd one!
P.S. The 1st one was good but too short but this one rocks
Adam

Daani responds:

Thanks for those words my friend!
I've already started with da 3rd, more info on my website (www.dpflashes.com)

I'll see ya Adam!
Daani